Thursday, May 10, 2018

School Photographs

School Photographs

Dear, Photographer

I am writing to you to express my opinion about the way you take and arrange the the class photographs.

Clearly the photos are very organised because the height  arrangement is good.

It is clear that the backdrop is very nice because it is not to flashy

I agree that putting the absent people in the names is a really good idea because when you look back at it you can see the people who have been absent.

I admire the red curtain at the back because you can see it clearly and its not camouflaged.

I'm absolutely certain that you should read my ideas mostcarfully. You may or may not agree with my opinions,but please do consider them. I look forward to hearing back from you.

Your sincerely, Arhan
                                                                                                   
                                                                                                                                     

A Letter from Gallipoli

  A Letter from Gallipoli 27/April/1918

Dear,dad
Here in gallipoli it’s very humid and it stinks! Out here on the other side of the world it’s terrible, we have to dig trenches about 3 feet. In gallipoli there’s loud noises BOOM that’s how loud the gunshots are, you’ll get used to it. Thousands of people are getting killed and wounded, there’s a lot of shocks and it feels uncomfortable. We all worry about our health, the food looks like it’s stale and it tasted horrible. The shrapnel scattered everywhere it nearly got me but I was lucky,it missed. I had to carry water all the way up the hill, it was tiring. I loved the ANZAC biscuits you sent to we but there so hard to eat I made it into porridge. We have to have a lot of ammunition. Our enemies are having dysentery, there getting weaker. The fight is ended, I enjoy eating the porridge.  

Lots of Love, Arhan